While reading the storyline, I noticed:
“for Khovak new now that was what it must be”
I assume that should read “Khovak [b:3k1rjy9f]k[/b:3k1rjy9f]new now”.
Thanks! I’ll fix that.
It’s nice to know that someone reads the story, I just changed it out from the old one yesterday. (This is the story available from the game login menu; the full version of the story on this website has been around for a while).